In my opinion the best way to know is to test it, create 1 or 2 more landing page and send each small number of traffic and see which one is the winner.
You might be trying to promote to many things at once. Also the most important part of your page is above the fold. Anything a person has to scroll down to see may not be seen at all. You have wasted space on your page. get rid of the header and use up the full width of the page. Try a column on the left that shows a picture of the product and a click here to learn more button and maybe a testimonial of how great it is. and use the column on the right side to make some bullet points on the benefits. Try to mention how this will help them. Here's a sample (this is not an affiliate page this is for demonstration purposes only) https://topfitnessvideos.com/email-cash-funnel/
Hope that helps,
Yeah new versions are much better! I like them. The pop up is not working. But get that working and split test them and go from there. Very nice!
When you click the button send me the checklist it says Facebook has detected Internetdosh.com isn't using a secure connection to transfer information.
So you need to get https on your site and that will fix that
Oh Okay, I sent you the unsecured version.
But I am still working on the backend for my email list, so you might get a few emails after you get the checklist.